Some people feel that entertainers( e.g. film stars,pop musicians or sports star) are paid too much money. Do u agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The paycheck that entertainers get is quite a lot

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to the other jobs role that

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a lot of qualifications and effort to be employed and get paid well. I agree to

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will examine my perspective and the reason why

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agree. The

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entertainment

industry has a certain connotation because of how overrated its paycheck is compared to the result and end-product

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a hospital whose daily shift will be around 30 hours shift per day

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dealing with lots of patients

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need specific licensed

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with a certain academic degree for them to be able to even get the job.

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might only need one skill that can help them achieve

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purpose, e.g a star film actor, they only have to focus on how to better their acting

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in order for them to get

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good film shoots and by doing it with bare minimum

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, without needing any certification or licensed

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, they will get paid hugely.

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to people glorifying certain jobs and undermining other

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as something

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not as crucial as it really is. All in all,

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believe that there

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be a specific change that should be improved. acknowledging that many jobs deserve better minimum

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improving the minimum wages for employees with certain qualifications will

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for the people who are disadvantaged.