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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced

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Currently,
people
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 produce more
rubbish
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 which has to negative
impact
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 on the
environmnt
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environment
in real life. In my view, the are several reasons why
people
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 produce more
rubbish
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 and it is important for the
government
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 to make a policy to help
people
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 from the
rubbish
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. Following the statement,
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 essay can give the reasons for that.
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, in my perspective nowadays, it is over-consumption for
people
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 in real life can make a negative
impact
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 on the environment and one of the
reason
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reasons
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 is household
waste
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. As we can see, these days each family has a problem with household
waste
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, which can
impact
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 their environment. The
impact
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 can be a negative
impact
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 for other
people
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besides
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 them,
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 as water pollution.
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, in Yogyakarta,
people
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 have many street foods and they
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 sell in the street in front of the main road, so
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 allows different houses or
people
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 in there. Water pollution can
impact
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 the
people
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 who live there. So
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 case should get attention from the
government
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 to finish that. Another reason is no
place
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 to throw the
rubbish
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 in
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 case. To solve
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 problem over
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 case, the
government
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 should make a policy to finish that, which can protect more
people
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 from skin disease or plague. The
government
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 can create special places to dispose of household
waste
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 and can
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 impose punishments on
people
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 who do not follow these rules.
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, the
government
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 can provide a
place
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 to dump the
rubbish
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, or the
government
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 can dig up the ground to bury the
rubbish
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. With the rule that
people
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 who violate the rules will be fined in the form of money which will be added to the regional treasury. In conclusion, to solve the
waste
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 problem, the
government
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 must provide a
place
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 to throw
rubbish
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 and make rules for those who do not throw
rubbish
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 in the right
place
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coherence cohesion
Improve the organization of your essay by structuring it with clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Expand on the reasons for increased rubbish production and the measures for waste management. Ensure that each paragraph supports the main idea and includes relevant examples.
task achievement
Work on addressing all parts of the task question. Develop a clear position on the reasons behind increased rubbish production and provide comprehensive ideas for waste reduction. Include specific examples to support your points.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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