Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

With the development of modern society that doesn’t really care about nature,

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to the point that many

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lost species

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their

habitat.

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phenomenon leads to a

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number to

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number

of

species

being extinct. I totally agree that the primary problem of the

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species

diversity whether it is

plants

or

animals

. Many

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species

came to

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because of rapid improvement in

number

and industry.

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caused many

animals

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or trespassed

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that

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occupied.

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, mining industries came to

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of

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for expanding

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their company and in search of a new mining point. When they found the location of the mining spot they claimed that

area

and began to construct

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or

building

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that

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activity

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conducted there.

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stayed there for their whole life lose

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habitat. Some

animals

might

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mining

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and hunted down by miners, whilst some

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animals

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run away and cannot be adapted to new

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and eventually

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grow

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in

number

and needs food sources and

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over people’s head.

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opened up

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that contained many

animals

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species

. And what happened next

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can be interpreted as miners

opened

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up new mining

location

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. The variety of

plants

will reduce in

number

parallel to

animals

.

Animals

and

plants

live and depend on each other. With rapid change in

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some

plants

cannot survive the changes.

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, industries that

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carbon emission gasses overwhelm the atmosphere and litter the

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air.

Plants

poisoned by

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toxic gasses

and

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died

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out because of malnutrition and cannot

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any of their needs for

surviving

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.

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contaminated

ground water

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groundwater

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with chemical waste and poisoned all the

plants

.

In

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the

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result

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many

of

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apply

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plants

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plant

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species

came

to

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extinct

because

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these activities.

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,

animals

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animal

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and

plants

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plant

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extinction

are

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the primary environmental problem. Without certain type of

animals

and

plants

that maintain the balance in the

environment

lead

up

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to many more environmental problems.

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the variety of

animals

and

plants

in

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planet

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would help solve many problems

that

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related to

environment

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the environment

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.