Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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and age, studies show that some

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spend a lot of spare

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watching or scrolling on phones, even though their parents know well where it leads when they grow up. In my opinion

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addiction

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is the worst problem for humanity and it has totally a negative development for the future.

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with, there are several reasons why the mobile

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has become an integral part of our daily lives.

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, it is no secret that most people, when getting out of bed, try to find where their

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is.

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they start scrolling through social networks, watching videos and looking for different content and extras. When

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type of

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manifests itself in adults,

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will copy as their parents do, because the young will not do what they hear, do what they see.

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, research shows that a typical smartphone user touches their device more than 2,500 times a

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. To solve

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problem, you need to set a schedule for each

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during which you should use your

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throughout the

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briefly.

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, telephone

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can cause a decrease in the quality of conversations. We can consider that the creation of a gadget is the best product that humanity has ever created. Because using the

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can solve most problems

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communication and so on. At the same

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, it will affect the speaking skill, especially in

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.

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can be seen as a global problem that needs to be solved.

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, I know many people who have a strong

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to the

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they are not even able to start a conversation, because they are used to communicating on the

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, I think everyone needs to find

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to just walk. Try going for a social walk sometimes. In

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conclusion,

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setting a

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time

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for

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on

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phone

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when they have

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a licence

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licence

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and sending them

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to play with real games is the key

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solving

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type of issue. The sooner adults start reducing the dose for

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, the better it will be for the future.