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The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts display how
students
 answered the questionnaire about services provided by the university
library
 in 2010. Generally, full-time
students
 find greater satisfaction in
overall
 university
library
 help provided in the survey rather than part-time ones. In terms of IT support, full-time
students
 are happier with the service, where 55% of
which
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them
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 are very happy and quite satisfied by nearly a third.
On the other hand
, only one out of five
of
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apply
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part-time
students
 feel the assistance is very well-offered and those responding "
quite
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quiet
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" are precisely 35%. The unsatisfied helps are agreed by 13% of full-time
students
,
whereas
 part-time
students
 answered just under 50%. Regarding the current opening hours of the
library
, 67% of full-time
students
 are very satisfied with the help
while
 a mere 1% of them are not happy at all. Interestingly, part-time
students
 are more satisfied with the recent
library
's opening hours by which 72% of the cohort are very happy and 5% seem not satisfied. Full-time
students
 and part-time
students
 are quite satisfied at 32% and 23% respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • university library
  • full-time students
  • part-time students
  • opinions
  • services
  • satisfaction
  • comparison
  • satisfaction levels
  • different library services
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