Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days some people think that the

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between low-paid and high-paid

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should be decreased. The question is, what will be the consequences if that happens? In

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action and

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give my own opinion on

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topic. In terms of

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side, reducing the

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between

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low-paid and high-paid

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can have many benefits.

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, it can lead to a more equitable society (or

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more income equality for the whole society).

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can reduce poverty and crime rates, making the country a much safer place to live in. To illustrate, low-paid workers in Egypt used to suffer from poverty, diseases, and high crime rates.

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, during the past few years, the minimum wage for all the low-paid

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was increased by the government, which led to

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much better living standards for all workers.

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, narrowing

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could have some potential disadvantages. One of the downsides is that some people would consider the equal par for different

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unfair.

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, surgeons' work is always more stressful than any other occupation,

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as technicians or cashiers.

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, a surgeon spends more time at work, which affects his/her social life.

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why surgeons or doctors should be paid, in general, more money to compensate

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and stress. In conclusion,

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lessening

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has cons, it could

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benefit the community in general and promote social harmony.

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, I believe that all governments should focus on applying regulations to make

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change.