Modern proffesional women confront a diffilculty that men dont generally face : the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this diffilculty Best be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge and experiance.
Nowadays,
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professional
women
faces
a difficulty that men actually don'Change the verb form
face
t
. The struggle to balance the pressures of work
and home. In my opinion
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opinion,
this
difficulty can be solved by the ideology of my own examples from my own knowledge and experiance
.
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experience
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women
play many vital role
in our economic development . Even the female workers Change to a plural noun
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equalises
the amount of male workers in most of the sectors. But the burden they suffer a lot is that they are Change the verb form
equalise
also
responsible for taking care
of their family . By focusing on the family and carrer
equally they may Correct your spelling
career
loss
their temper Replace the word
lose
as well as
, they may lose something that they have to keep for long
. A Correct article usage
a long
women
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woman
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has been
past
3 months. She is working in Correct article usage
the past
an
BPO company her husband is an Change the article
a
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in Correct your spelling
employee
an
private company . she had a chance to Change the article
a
work
from abroad through the same company . she didn't
accept the oppurtunity
to go Correct your spelling
opportunity
to
abroad because of the rejection of her husband . Remove the preposition
apply
A common
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Common women
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women
facing
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faces
this
type of difficulties
in her life .
By taking Fix the agreement mistake
difficulty
part
of
their Change preposition
in
responsibilities
, The difficulties
can be solved . Becoming their part
of life and sharing our lives only don't
fulfil our responsibilities
. Women
, they
are not assigned to Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
daily for their family
, it is their responsibility to Fix the agreement mistake
families
taking
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take
care
of thier
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their
family
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families
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we , males too have Add a comma
Eventually,
responsibilities
to taking
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take
care
of our family and
by not ignoring the household Correct word choice
apply
works
and taking Fix the agreement mistake
work
care
of our family . A freind
who knows me well andCorrect your spelling
friend
i
used to give him Change the capitalization
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an advice
to help his wife during his Remove the article
advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
freetime
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free time
Actually
he had Add a comma
Actually,
an
less working hours compared to his wife . He did as it is what Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
i
asked him to do . Now his wife had an Change the capitalization
I
oppurtunity
to Correct your spelling
opportunity
work
in
abroad . Change preposition
apply
And she
thanked her husband and she Correct word choice
She
adressed
that, he is Correct your spelling
addressed
an
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a
part
of her responsibilities
. So the difficulties
can be solved by being part
of their household works
and taking Fix the agreement mistake
work
care
of their family .
To conclude
, the
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apply
proffesional
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professional
women
struggle to balance the pressures of work
and home, the
opinion and my own examples from my own knowledge and Change the word
my
experiance
will solve the Correct your spelling
experience
difficulties
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