Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

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exploration as current.

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is believed to be infinite and the knowledge that human has gained about it is too little so far. That’s why several non-governmental organizations are established to satisfy man’s curiosity about

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to numerous small-to-large-scale projects relating to the universe,

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with them are substantial flows of money needed to carry out from start to finish. These large expenses,

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, could be spent on improving life standards

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as many think that man should focus on lives on Earth before

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. In terms of

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exploration, the writer believes that the

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as agriculture and tourism, heavily depend on the national weather forecast. By discovering new atmospheric areas for satellites to come, any unexpected climate patterns could be informed in real-time, farmers thereby won’t have their crops damaged by climate disasters like tornado or hurricane, and travel guides will know which day is least likely to rain to lead their tourists go outdoors. Another merit is that fostering

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discoveries can partially locate a new planet which is live-able to

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and able to maintain industrial activities as current on Earth.

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their own carbon footprint and it is a long time from now before scientists

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find out when is doomsday. In conclusion,

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enhancing living standards

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right to some extent, I would lean

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the idea that money should be spent on exploring the universe

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the above-mentioned reasons.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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291 words

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scientific discoveries
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pioneering research
socio-economic development
improved healthcare
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poverty alleviation
infrastructure
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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try to hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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