Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

This

essay will explain my opinion that huge amounts of money should be poured into bettering life standards

instead

of

space

exploration as current.

Space

is believed to be infinite and the knowledge that human has gained about it is too little so far. That’s why several non-governmental organizations are established to satisfy man’s curiosity about

space

.

This

has

leaded

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to numerous small-to-large-scale projects relating to the universe,

along

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with them are substantial flows of money needed to carry out from start to finish. These large expenses,

however

, could be spent on improving life standards

instead

as many think that man should focus on lives on Earth before

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outer

space

. In terms of

space

exploration, the writer believes that the

advantage

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of

this

could outweigh the

disadvantage

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.

To begin

with, any weather-relating spheres,

such

as agriculture and tourism, heavily depend on the national weather forecast. By discovering new atmospheric areas for satellites to come, any unexpected climate patterns could be informed in real-time, farmers thereby won’t have their crops damaged by climate disasters like tornado or hurricane, and travel guides will know which day is least likely to rain to lead their tourists go outdoors. Another merit is that fostering

space

discoveries can partially locate a new planet which is live-able to

human

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and able to maintain industrial activities as current on Earth.

Nevertheless

,

this

plus is not practical as individuals are all contributing to

lower

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their own carbon footprint and it is a long time from now before scientists

could

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find out when is doomsday. In conclusion,

although

many insist

on

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enhancing living standards

are

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right to some extent, I would lean

myself

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on

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the idea that money should be spent on exploring the universe

as

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the above-mentioned reasons.