A lot of money is used to explore space. It has been said
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that funding should
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to cause an improvement
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standards
.
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why living
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need to be raised money because social inequalities still exist around the world. We just focus on
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and forget how the poor and disabled people live. More and more slums appear
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them.
if we do not improve living
standards
on Earth, there will be more unemployment and crime, which is
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issue that governments still consider.
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of improving living
standards
in our modern era
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the nations will promote significantly.
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is because citizens have
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and good
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of revenue
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to GDP
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more opportunities to research galactic exploration. It is
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to build up the country.
Additionally
, if people have stable jobs, governments will not pay too much
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to living
standards
and just concentrate on exploring space and natural resources
In conclusion, governments should cause
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in living
standards
instead
of space exploration.
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that people will have a good living cost and permanent
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issues will decrease make
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peaceful and tranquil