It is often considered that the government should spend millions of dollars on exploring
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space
every year.
However
, some
disagree and
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the
money
on developing living standards on our
Earth
. Personally, I completely agree with
this
stance.
First of all, I strongly believe that it is
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to enhance living standards
on Change preposition
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around the world. There are
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of Change preposition
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percentages of the poverty
people
, regardless of
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and small countries. They are
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lack of the
,
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, accommodations, jobs and
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in recent years.
Therefore
, the
governments
have to
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about their
life
and cost more
money
to develop them, especially children. They need to spend
money
to provide enough
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for children immediately because the children will take over our future. The USA is the best example
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this
statement, each day, it has more than 500
people
who are
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and do not have enough
money
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because of the economic crisis. Almost
peopleCorrect determiner usage
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have to stay outside and hope to have a helping
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their
governments
.
Secondly
, others argue that we should save
money
and invest
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space
exploration because they believe in the near future, our
Earth
will not have enough
space
for us and it will be out of
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of the
governments
when the population always increasing every day. So
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, they should pay our
money
for
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space
research to have opportunities to approach
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life
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other
planets
. They
also
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people
to move
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planets
and can
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the proportions of homelessness on
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Earth
. In 2020, a group of scientists in England had an experience to go to the moon by spaceship.
Consequently
, they had
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for us that we might have a chance to approach the moon and live there in the future. By the way, they had the research about the amount of oxygen outside the
earth
and they
also
took some animals which went
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planets
. They really believe that they can have some opportunities to have new
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planets
.
Considering all of the above, I totally believe that the
governments
still have to
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concernReplace the word
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and
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more
money
forChange preposition
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developing the living standards on our
earth
, especially poverty
people
because of the lack of
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accommodations, healthcare,
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educationsFix the agreement mistake
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,….
As well
asCorrect word choice
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, they complete nice
life
on our
earth
, they have
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about the
life
on
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and other
planets
.