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Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?

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It is sad but true that, every day millions of tons of
food
 is wasted all over the world. There are many reasons for
this
 cause. Both, the possibles motives
as well as
 the measures are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with valid reasons and examples. Scrutinising the reasons from the grass-root level, the foremost one is
that
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, when the
food
 is made with improper hygiene and when it is not up to expectations.
For example
, when you have expectations of eating spicy
food
 and you are served other taste
food
,
then
 you won't like it and the
food
 will be wasted. Another reason for the wastage of
food
 is that when
people
 are illiterate,
so
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they don't value
food
. In order to situation some steps can be taken.
To begin
 with, our government or the
world union
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World Union
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 can take a few steps to prevent the wastage of
food
for example
, the government could make the rules for hygiene and storage of
food
 more strict so that no part of the
food
 is wasted. Another solution is that
,
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 awareness programs should be campaigned everywhere, so that
people
 can know the importance of
food
, and
people
 would not waste
food
.
To sum up
, we have to always keep in mind that there are many
people
 in
this
 world who sleep hungry every day. So at least, we could prevent the spoilage of
food
 by cooperating with the government, so that the needed
people
 can have it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • excessive
  • production
  • consumption
  • storage
  • handling
  • aesthetic standards
  • regulations
  • distribution
  • raising awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • composting
  • waste management
  • organic waste
  • redistribute
  • food banks
  • charities
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