Many people no longer read newspaper or watch tv news programmes. instead they get news about the world from the internet. is this positive or negative development?
These days, many
people
prefer to get new news
about the whole world from the internet
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Internet
also
they don't prefer to read newspaper
or watch Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
tv
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TV
news
programmes
. In this
essay i
will discuss the advantages and disadvantages Change the capitalization
I
about
that development Change preposition
of
also
Correct word choice
and also
i
will draw my personal conclusion.
On the one hand, Change the capitalization
I
they
are a lot of advantages Correct pronoun usage
there
of
that thing. First of all, nowadays we have a lot of Change preposition
to
application
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applications
such
as instegram
and Correct your spelling
Instagram
facebook
or Capitalize word
Facebook
snapchat
we can see there the new Change the capitalization
Snapchat
news
directly. Moreover
, I can see it for
many Change preposition
apply
time
and Fix the agreement mistake
times
i
can share it with my friends. Change the capitalization
I
In addition
, when we camparison
get Correct your spelling
comparison
news
from the internet
with read
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by reading
newspaper
and watch Add an article
the newspaper
a newspaper
tv
programmes
it's take
short time than both of them.
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it's taken
On the other hand
, Also
they are some
disadvantages Rephrase
also some
of
that. Change preposition
to
First,
in social media
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media,
they
are many fake Correct pronoun usage
there
account
and they will share Change to a plural noun
accounts
the
fake Correct article usage
apply
news
and
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apply
that
will be a big problem for society because all Correct pronoun usage
which
people
will believe that. Although
,
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apply
they
are a lot of Correct pronoun usage
there
people
who work for newspaper
or Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
tv
Correct your spelling
TV
programmes
they will lose their jobes
if Correct your spelling
jobs
people
get news
from the internet
insted
of Correct your spelling
instead
read
Wrong verb form
reading
newspaper
or Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
watch
Wrong verb form
watching
tv
Correct your spelling
TV
programmes
.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to get
Change the verb form
getting
news
from the internet
. Capitalize word
Internet
In addition
, The positive development of the internet
it's
Verb problem
apply
take
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takes
news
information from whole
world. Change the article
the whole
Besides
, the negative development of the internet
is spread
of fake Correct article usage
the spread
news
for all people
. Moreover
, the government should support people
to watch tv
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TV
programmes
or read newspaper
because that will Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
helping
them to increase the economy and save the Change the verb form
help
be helping
people
jobs who work there.Submitted by xtra68687 on
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