Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both view and give your opinion

Some people have some opinion that the numbers of
aircarft
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aircraft
used to
transport
for reaching fruits and vegetables to many countries of the world didn't grow or
uot
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out
of season.
Whereas
many others give an opposite
arguement
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argument
because it is costly price and negative effects by emitting many emission.In my opinion, I
believed
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that the question
give
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information
abuot
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about
reason and
practical
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.
Firstly
,
aircrafts
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aircraft
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including many
transport
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transports
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as
plane
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a plane
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, helicopter,
..
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It
transport
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not only people but
also
fruits, vegetables and many things.
This
means that when an area or region has to suffer from famine or weather.
It
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unsuitable for their crops, transmission by air.
Additionally
, many countries like the products of China, United Nation, where has numerous airlines to
transport
.
For instance
, in United
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,
it
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has many kinds of weather so it spends less attention on agricultural
issuses
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issues
due to
be
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useful
to
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transport
by
aircrafts
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aircraft
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.
On the other hand
, the
aircrafts
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aircraft
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require
tonnel
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tunnel
tonnes
fuel coal, electricity,
oil
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and oil
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to activate the
engiges
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engines
.
So
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this
is the main reason that many opinion
refused using
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airlines to
reach
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foods
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food
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.
A research
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at the environmental
insutute
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institute
in California shows that nearly 30% of carbon dioxide emitted into the atmosphere,
affacting
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affecting
the numerous
of
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air quality
was
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airlines
had
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. In conclusion,
aircrafts
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aircraft
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which
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are many useful
to
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good transortation. But it doesn't mean that should be used
to
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too
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much.
Otherwise
, the world will have to face more
environment
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problems

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task response
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