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Aircart have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plant hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Some people have some opinion that the numbers of
aircaft
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aircraft
 used to transport for reaching fruits and vegetables to many countries of the world didn't grow or out of season. many others give an opposite argument because it is costly price and has negative effects by emitting many emissions.In my opinion, I believe that the question gives information about reason and practicality.
Firstly
,
aircraft
 including many transports as a plane,
helicopters
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.It transports not only people but
also
 fruits, vegetables and many things.
This
 means that when an area or region has to suffer from famine or weather. It is unsuitable for their crops, transmission by air.
Additionally
, many countries like the products of China, United Nation, where has numerous airlines to transport.
For instance
, in United Nations,
it
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has many kinds of weather so it spends less attention on agricultural issues
due to
 being useful for transport by
aircraft
.
On the other hand
, the
aircraft
 require tunnel fuel coal, electricity,
oil
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and oil
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 to activate the engines.
this
 is the main reason that many opinions refuse to use airlines to buy food.
A research
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 at the
environmental institute
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Environmental Institute
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 in California shows that nearly 30% of carbon dioxide is emitted into the atmosphere, affecting the numerous
of
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air quality
was
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airlines have. For me, I believe that if you spend money and time helping other people, they will help you when you are in a difficult situation. So if the government help another country, they will help us again if we need it,
that is
 called friendship. In conclusion,
aircraft
,
which
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are
many
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useful for good transportation. But it doesn't mean that should be used too much.
Otherwise
, the world will have to face more environmental problems.
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