The given chart below illustrates the proportion of individuals of 4 kinds age groups who watched in movie theater in one national European between 2000 and 2011.
The line graph displays the four
age
groups that went to the movies
once in Great Britain between 1984 and 2000. Taking everything into account, it is clear that
those between the ages of 15 and 24 are the most likely to visit the movies
. In contrast
, the age
group of 35 and older has the lowest percentage of moviegoers.
Firstly
, the number of individuals in the 18–24 age
range who visit the movies
rises year after year and surpasses all other age
groups, peaking at about 60. In any event, there are roughly 25 persons in each of the age
categories 7–14 and 25–35 who attend movies
. Finally
, the age
group of 35 and older has the lowest percentage of moviegoers from the start to the finish of the term.
Every year, the number of people going to the cinema keeps rising.Submitted by Kotchamon.jk on
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