The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented pie charts illustrate the rates of how

much

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many

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full-time and part-time workers are satisfied with the technological

support

as well as

the latest opening time of a university library.

Overall

, when it comes to the systematical

suppliment

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supplement

, it can be said that full-time

studens

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students

student

utilize the function in their

job

more than

the

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apply

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part-time co-workers.

Moreover

the

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apply

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people

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with

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full-time

job

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jobs

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tend to consider the current opening hours as decent compared to the

part-time

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part-time ones

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. Only 13% of full-time

studens

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students

do not feel happy with

the

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apply

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support

, but 45% of the

part- time

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part-time

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workers do not answer

possitively

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positively

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and 32

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% of people think the

support

has

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a possitive

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possitive

Correct your spelling

positive

effect on their

job

more than the part-time. Even though the students who work fully engage with the library

job

longer than the part-time, the former are more satisfied with the working hours, the proportion of the people who are not is only 1%. On the

contracy

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contrary

, the number of

the

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apply

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students who work partially is 5%.

Thus

, it seems the full-time workers can get more merits from the IT function at the library and do not have any

complain

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complaints

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, but the part-time students do as they can barely take the merits from the system

support

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words support, job with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

204 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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