The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is stated that the primary purpose of

science

ought to be

improve

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and

development

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of lives of

general

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public. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement. Because huge

amount

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of money and resources are allocated

for

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science

and

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it should

have

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repay

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by offering

comfort

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lives for ordinary people.

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amount of funds are allocated by many countries for scientific research and developments which can

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for other societal activities

such

as

upgrade

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educations

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education

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,constructing infrastructure,

eliminate

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poverty,food supply

and

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etc. Some of

findings

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comes

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through several

number of

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experiments and incur large expenditures.

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, to obtain

return

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of

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this

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high priced

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investments

science

need to focus on

necessities

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of people. There are medical treatments, protection measures from natural disasters,

time saving

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instruments,

enhance

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food quality

and

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etc.

Furthermore

,

future

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of

science

is mainly depends

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on the safety and sustainability of mankind. Some

of

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scientific inventions are challenge human lives and hazardous to living beings which

make

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harmful

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environment.

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great innovation of dynamite

done

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by Scientist Nobel which was aimed to assist mining activities.

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, today

that

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inventions caused

to

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disasters and terrible issues. Those

type

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of harmful inventions directly influence not only specific

region

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regions

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but

also

it will affect whole human beings. In conclusion, billions of dollars

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for

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in

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science

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field which can

use

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for other necessities of people. Some scientific findings

leads

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life threatening to individuals and negatively influence

on

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future generations.

Therefore

,

main

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object of

the

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science

need

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to lengthen and elevate

the

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peoples ‘

life style

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lifestyles

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.