The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is stated that the primary purpose of
science
ought to be improve
and Fix the infinitive
to improve
development
of lives of Replace the word
develop
general
public. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement. Because huge Add an article
the general
amount
of money and resources are allocated Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
for
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to
science
and
it should Correct word choice
apply
have
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be
repay
by offering Change the verb form
repaid
comfort
lives for ordinary people.
Replace the word
comfortable
High
amount of funds are allocated by many countries for scientific research and developments which can Add an article
The high
A high
utilize
for other societal activities Wrong verb form
be utilised
such
as upgrade
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upgrading
educations
,constructing infrastructure,Fix the agreement mistake
education
eliminate
poverty,food supply Wrong verb form
eliminating
and
etc. Some of Correct word choice
apply
findings
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the findings
comes
through several Change the verb form
come
number of
experiments and incur large expenditures. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Therefore
, to obtain return
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the return
a return
of
Change preposition
on
this
Correct determiner usage
these
high priced
investments Add a hyphen
high-priced
science
need to focus on necessities
of people. There are medical treatments, protection measures from natural disasters, Correct article usage
the necessities
time saving
instruments,Add a hyphen
time-saving
enhance
food quality Wrong verb form
enhanced
and
etc.
Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, future
of Correct article usage
the future
science
is mainly depends
on the safety and sustainability of mankind. Some Change the verb form
mainly depends
of
scientific inventions are challenge human lives and hazardous to living beings which Change preposition
apply
make
Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
harmful
environment. Correct article usage
the harmful
For instance
great innovation of dynamite done
by Scientist Nobel which was aimed to assist mining activities. Add a missing verb
was done
However
, today that
inventions caused Correct word choice
apply
to
disasters and terrible issues. Those Change preposition
apply
type
of harmful inventions directly influence not only specific Fix the agreement mistake
types
region
but Fix the agreement mistake
regions
also
it will affect whole human beings.
In conclusion, billions of dollars invest
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are invested
for
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in
science
field which can Correct article usage
the science
use
for other necessities of people. Some scientific findings Wrong verb form
be used
leads
life threatening to individuals and negatively influence Change the verb form
lead
on
future generations. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, main
object of Change the article
the main
the
Correct article usage
apply
science
need
to lengthen and elevate Verb problem
is
the
peoples ‘Correct article usage
apply
life style
.Correct your spelling
lifestyles
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