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The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts give information about full-time and part-time
students
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' satisfaction levels with the facilities offered by the university
library
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 in 2010. The surveys were divided into two topics, mainly focusing on the performance of IT support and the operation time of the
library
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.
Overall
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, the majority of full-time
students
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 were satisfied with the IT support.
In contrast
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, part-time
students
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 were not helped at all.
On the other hand
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, both
students
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 were happy with the
library
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's opening hours.
Firstly
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, it can be seen that 55% of full-time
students
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 voted the highest rate of satisfaction bar, which represents that they felt content with the support. As opposed to that, 45% of part-time
students
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 did not feel supported by the IT
library
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 team. Regarding the opening hours, both of the
students
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 were happy with the
library
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 service. In the results given, 67% of full-time
students
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 voted for the "very happy" rate. In line with full-time
students
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' opinions, 72% of part-time
students
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 were
also
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 happy.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • university library
  • full-time students
  • part-time students
  • opinions
  • services
  • satisfaction
  • comparison
  • satisfaction levels
  • different library services
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