You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it
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shower with my family members. Nothing can beat the feelings
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in my arms. I would like to say how greatful
I am to work with all great team members. During my pregnancy, I could not forget how helpful you all are and I will forever Correct your spelling
grateful
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for all your great support and care. I would like to convey special thanks and blessings that you all showered me as a Correct your spelling
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gifts
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crib is so beautiful and elegant. My future baby
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in a perfect size and size to fit in my bedroom. I was overwhelmed by emotion by reading a card
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cherished
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cherish
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. Thank you for amazing
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the amazing
gift
and a card
. Best regards, KhyatiSubmitted by bhavsar.urvashi on
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task response
Ensure that all the required elements of the task are addressed clearly in the letter. In this case, you have mentioned the special occasion and expressed gratitude for the gift and card, but you can provide more details about the occasion.
coherence cohesion
The overall structure of the letter is well-organized, with a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion. However, you could improve coherence by using linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly.
lexical resource
Your use of vocabulary is appropriate and you have effectively conveyed your gratitude. To enhance your lexical resource, consider using a wider range of vocabulary and expressions.
grammatical range
Your grammar is generally accurate, with only a few minor errors. To demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures, try incorporating complex sentence structures and varied sentence lengths.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.