The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

picture illustrates the procedures for converting

sugar

cane into

sugar

.

Overall

, there are two stages and seven steps to refine

sugar

. In the first stage, it takes twelve to eighteen months to grow

sugar

canes

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, and after

that

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the farmers start to cut down the

sugar

canes

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cane

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and pour these crops

in

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a truck by harvesting

machine

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machines

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and human

labors

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labor

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.

Then

the

labors

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crushing

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them

by

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specific

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machine and obtain the

juice

which is used for refining. In the second stage,

firstly

, the workers use the limestone filter to purify

juice

in the factory.

Secondly

, they pour the

juice

in

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into

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a

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evaporator which uses the heat to make the

juice

become syrup.

Then

comes to the centrifuging step, the syrup is placed in the facility which can

separates

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sugar

crystals from syrup. After finishing all the procedures above, the extracted

sugar

is place

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in a huge container in order to

drying

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and

cooling

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it down.