Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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this
new millennium,
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much of the world places a premium on combating the issue of the
environment
and
economically
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growth. Nowadays
people
population feel that it is not possible for
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nation to be economically and
environmently
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environmentally
progressive at
same
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the same
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time
. I assert that there are scores of views, that
would
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be explained in the upcoming paragraphs. I
belive
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it is possible, that the
environment
and economy will grow parallel.
To begin
with,
one
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side of the argument, there are few
people
hold
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the opinion that, nature and money will not develop at
same
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time
. The most
complelling
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compelling
reason for believing
this
is that, production of goods.
People
think if the industry
produce
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goods
due to
this
pollution will increase.
As a result
, they will damage the
environment
and human health at the same
time
. The
bussinesman
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businessman
businessmen
will increase the profit, help the country to grow but
at
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the
end
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end,
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they
rise
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raise
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the pollution as well.
For example
, plastic
bag
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bags
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,
shopkeeper
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shopkeepers
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use
plastic
due to
this
envirnment
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environment
get
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getting
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distrubed
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disturbed
.
On the other hand
,
the
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nature and economic growth will rise at the same
time
.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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should
introduced
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recycle
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product
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products
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. To explicity, they should
use
recycle
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material
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materials
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like cans, bottles and
bag
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bags
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as well.
Secondly
, they should
use
environmentally friendly
material
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materials
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,
while
producing the goods or any other items,
due to
this
the country will grow
as well as
environment
will not
effect
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.
In addition
to government should
band
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ban
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some items which
leads to
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pollute
the
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society.
For example
, Nowadays in many
countries
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countries,
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people
use
paper bags for shopping,
As a result
, plastic bags are not creating any
problem
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problems
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in
environment
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the environment
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. In
the
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conclusion,
while
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both views are commonly held in society and the government. I
beleive
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believe
that both will grow at the same
time
. the profit is important for economic
devleopment
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development
but at the
dame
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same
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time
environment
is
also
paramount for
nation
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the nation
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. So, industry should
use
recycle
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recycled
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product
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products
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and
people
will contribute
their
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effects as well.
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