> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. > Write at least 150 words

> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the future development of the centre of a small town called Islip.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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will be expanding, removing, adding, and converting some areas. In the past, there were shops in front of the main road, which will add three more amenities namely, the shopping centre, bus station, and car park.
Furthermore
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, at the east will add new housing
also
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in the south of the shops. So in total, there will be four housing. prior to recontraction, Islip did not have a special walking route for people pedestrians and now it will introduce a road that surrounds the town that has a dual-carriageway. The main road will be changed to a pedestrian-only way. Down the map is the school
that is
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believed to have developed modernly.
However
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, some area
such
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as the countryside is going to be closed out and places like the bus station and car parks are going to be small. The park will
also
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be resized to accommodate the new housing development.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • centre of a small town
  • development
  • current
  • planned
  • features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • summary
  • information
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