> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. > Write at least 150 words
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The maps illustrate the future development of the centre of a small town called Islip.
Overall
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It is clear that
will be expanding, removing, adding, and converting some areas.
In the past, there were shops in front of the main road, which will add three more amenities namely, the shopping centre, bus station, and car park. Linking Words
Furthermore
, at the east will add new housing Linking Words
also
in the south of the shops. So in total, there will be four housing. prior to recontraction, Islip did not have a special walking route for people pedestrians and now it will introduce a road that surrounds the town that has a dual-carriageway. The main road will be changed to a pedestrian-only way. Down the map is the school Linking Words
that is
believed to have developed modernly.
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However
, some area Linking Words
such
as the countryside is going to be closed out and places like the bus station and car parks are going to be small. The park will Linking Words
also
be resized to accommodate the new housing development.Linking Words
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