You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Phillips,
I am writing
this
letter to express my feelings towards your company.I have been working for the last
two years and have done a lot of hard work for this
firm.So,this
company has success in the whole world.
To begin
with,all workers do the task with enthusiasm,So that,our group
success Change noun form
group's
touch
Correct subject-verb agreement
touches
to
every corner of the nation.Change preposition
apply
Last
year,I went to Canada for a business trip and our organization got first prize for the quality of the product and I was announced as a skilled Manager.Because,
I did Remove the comma
apply
performance
with focus and completed my project before the deadline.I have been attending meetings with international Add an article
a performance
the performance
businessman
and they always give positive responses to us.I handled many big deals and Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
also
got profit from them.
Moreover
,I prefer to job
with you.Verb problem
work
Firstly
,I know that everything and strategies.Which needs to grow your group.KPS business also
provide
Change the verb form
provides
good
salary and I get Correct article usage
a good
much
chances to visit other countries through Change the quantifier
many
this
firm.That's why, I want to grow up myself in this
association.
Furthermore
,I want to ask you for
the meeting.I think that you should organise a meeting to discuss Change preposition
about
this
.If you agree then
we will hold a meeting next week at 11am.
I am looking forward to your response.
Thank you
Yours sincerely,
Gagandeep KaurSubmitted by sidhuranjeet518 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite