Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.
Dear Saini,
Hi, how are you doing? I hope you are doing well. By the way, I got the pictures of our Spain trip
last
month.
Thank you for sending me these pictures. I love it this
is because it was our first trip together. When I see these pictures, it makes me happy and reminds that time. Thanks to you, we went to Spain's luxurious hotel which is located Downtown at cheap prices. It had amazing amenities such
as an outdoor swimming pool, food and spa. I will go there with my mom next year on her birthday.
As you know, I went to South Korea last
week to meet my family and congratulate them on my grandmother's birthday. That’s why I replied too late sorry.
I really want to invite you to my Como next Saturday. If you have time you can stay with me and my dog. I will go to buy some iced wine for you so hope you come to Como.
I’m looking forward to getting a positive reply from you.
Thank you.
Best wishes,
Hwiju Jin.Submitted by gnlwnww on
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task response
Ensure that you address all the points mentioned in the prompt. It is important to thank your friend for the photos and the holiday, explain the reason for the late response, and invite them to come and stay with you.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a logical and organized structure in your letter. Each paragraph should focus on a specific idea or topic.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using more varied and precise words. This will make your letter more engaging and interesting to read.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity and fluency in your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite