nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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environment is a real concern. The

earth

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is nearly

overload

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not only because of

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but

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what they

throught

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throw

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exploration

population

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in some countries, especially in poor

contries

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countries

lead to the decline of healthy places to live. The

concequence

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consequence

of high

polulation

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pollution

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on with high life

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, high education is that

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einvironment

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environment

was

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day by day. Plastic is

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used

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in almost

industries

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because of its' cheap value and our easy habits.

Gabage

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is not

seperated

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separated

in probably

dusbins

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dustbins

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even

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throught

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through

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on streets, rivers, oceans. Recycle containers are not yet

applyed

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applied

in F&B industries.

Gabage

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will be controlled if

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have

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awareness

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of loving the

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as fresh

palces

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place

to enjoy our

lifes

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consumer

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habits

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gargage in the right places and try to do anything to protect

healthy

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environment for

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

164 words

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