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nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

#garbage #waste #concern
Nowadays,
life
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the life
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 environment is a real concern. The
earth
 is nearly
overload
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 not only because of
human
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humans
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 but
also
 what they
throught
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throw
 out. Garbage. The
explorarion
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exploration
 of
population
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the population
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 in some countries, especially in poor
contries
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countries
 lead to the decline of healthy places to live. The
concequence
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consequence
 of high
polulation
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pollution
 but not
go
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going
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 on with high life
condition
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conditions
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, high education is that
:
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apply
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 The
earth
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earth's
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einvironment
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environment
 was
destroying
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destroyed
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 day by day. Plastic is
using
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used
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 in almost
industries
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all industries
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 because of its' cheap value and our easy habits.
Gabage
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Garbage
 is not
seperated
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separated
 in probably
dusbins
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dustbins
dustbin
 even
it
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if it
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 is
throught
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through
thought
 on streets, rivers, oceans. Recycle containers are not yet
applyed
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applied
 in F&B industries.
Gabage
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Garbage
 will be controlled if
human
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humans
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have
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has
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awareness
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an awareness
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 of loving the
earth
 as fresh
palces
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place
 to enjoy our
lifes
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lives
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. So we need to change our habits in using
recycles
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recycled
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 consumer
instead
 of plastic, change the
habits
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habit
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keeps
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of keeping
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 gargage in the right places and try to do anything to protect
healthy
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a healthy
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 environment for
community
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the community
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in
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on
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the
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apply
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earth
.
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