The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and of women working in different occupations.

The table presents the amount of average weekly earnings of males and females in various professions in 2015.

Overall

, men working in all five mentioned occupations earned more income per week than women, with the largest difference seen in the figure for technicians.

In addition

, the pay for those who held the title of professional was highest in both genders, with respective numbers being 2,000

USD

and 1,900

USD

. Male technicians received 1,400

USD

every week, compared to only 900

USD

of their female counterparts.

Similarly

, the total amount of male service workers being paid was far higher than that of women, which was 1,300

USD

and 950

USD

in that order. As for administrative jobs in

this

survey, employers said that they gave 1,350

USD

per week to each male worker,

while

the figure for each woman was 1,000

USD

. The proceeds of manual labourers who were male

also

far exceeded that of females, at 1,100

USD

and 850

USD

respectively.

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