The charts show the info about the use of Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000.
The charts give the number of
internet
usage as well as
the mean personal expenditure on online shopping within five European countries. Generally, Sweden represents the highest population using the internet
. Moreover
, the UK spends most of its money purchasing stuff through the mentioned platform.
In terms of internet
usage, 35% of Sweden people use the internet
, followed by the UK at two in five. The others in the cohort, except Spain, associate their life with the internet
by the range hovering around a tenth to 15%. Spain, on the other hand
, spends only a mere 5% on the world wide web.
In addition
, each person in Sweden allocates 76 euros
on average for online shopping, which is smaller than the UK and dedicates their money to purchasing things through the world wide web
87 Capitalize word
Web
euros
. France and Germany also
spend their money on personal shopping experiences 57 euros
and 46 euros
per person respectively. In contrast
,10 euros
is typically spent by Spain on such
expenditure.Submitted by raviandrakanty on
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