The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information concerning the salaries of various professions in the UK and the average working
hours
per week for each profession are represented in the table. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the number that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in Pounds.
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Overall
, It can be clearly seen that the salaries of every given occupation have increased over the period, Linking Words
whereas
the highest working Linking Words
hours
job is firefighter.
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To begin
with the firefighter, their number of salary has been moderately raised by 100 from the given time Linking Words
while
the average weekly job duration is 55 Linking Words
hours
.
Moving on to nurses and underground drivers, the income rates have increased by 100 which is the same level as firefighters when they work about 38 and 36 Use synonyms
hours
per week respectively.
The exception is the police because Use synonyms
this
is the only occupation in which their income rate has risen by 200, Linking Words
while
their office hour per week is 40.Linking Words
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