Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there

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plenty of news about celebrities,

however

, most

of

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the

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people only focus on their richness and frame, not the

achievement

they achieved. Some parents

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concern

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it could be a negative sample for the youth. Personally, I definitely agree with

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notion, and the following content will list the reasons.

Achievement

has

an

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unique meaning

for

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our current

world

. There are many ways to become rich,

for instance

,

business man

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,

actor

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actors

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and even stocks or

lottery

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can bring enormous wealth to a person.

However

, nobody in

this

world

will remember it.

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, the people who did change

this

world

are

memorised

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and

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appreciated for centuries.

For example

, Thomas Edison invented and improved innovations,

such

as

light

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bulb and radio, which shocked the whole

world

and brought a higher quality of life for every human being. For his contribution, none of us will forget him.

Achievement

made by celebrities has an educational purpose for children’s learning.Children need a

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while

they are learning and growing up, they will imitate every action,

furthermore

, when they become an adult, their behaviour and personality will

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to

their

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in their childhood.

As a result

, if the journalist ignore the celebrities’

achievement

and only report their fortune, teenagers will convert into

that

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type of people who only pursue

for

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money,

in addition

, they will

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not only the sense of

achievement

but

also

the virtue which lead to success will be neglected by our next generation. In general, understanding the background

how

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celebrities are successful can be a crucial part of children’s education. Either the sense of

achievement

or the virtue

which own

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by the famous person

are

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important, both of them are crucial to

shape

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a teenager.