Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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plenty of news about celebrities,

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, most

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people only focus on their richness and frame, not the

achievement

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they achieved. Some parents

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concern

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it could be a negative sample for the youth. Personally, I definitely agree with

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notion, and the following content will list the reasons.

Achievement

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has

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unique meaning

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our current

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. There are many ways to become rich,

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business man

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,

actor

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actors

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and even stocks or

lottery

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can bring enormous wealth to a person.

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, nobody in

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world

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will remember it.

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, the people who did change

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memorised

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and

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appreciated for centuries.

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, Thomas Edison invented and improved innovations,

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as

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bulb and radio, which shocked the whole

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and brought a higher quality of life for every human being. For his contribution, none of us will forget him.

Achievement

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made by celebrities has an educational purpose for children’s learning.Children need a

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they are learning and growing up, they will imitate every action,

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, when they become an adult, their behaviour and personality will

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to

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in their childhood.

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, if the journalist ignore the celebrities’

achievement

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and only report their fortune, teenagers will convert into

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type of people who only pursue

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money,

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, they will

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not only the sense of

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but

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the virtue which lead to success will be neglected by our next generation. In general, understanding the background

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celebrities are successful can be a crucial part of children’s education. Either the sense of

achievement

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or the virtue

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by the famous person

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important, both of them are crucial to

shape

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a teenager.