Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do agree or disagree ?

There is an

arguement

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argument

that dollars should be spent on the

lving

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living

standards of the

Earth

whereas

a

big

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number of dollars are used to

spent

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spend

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on

space

every year. The writer

agree

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agrees

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with the statement that

imrpving

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improving

the living of

Earth

which is have more advantages. First of all, the

money

nowadays

are

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is

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used to spend on lots of items to support

for

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apply

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the

researches

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research

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outside the

Earth

. It may have to do something which

have

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a harmful effects

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harmful effects

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on the

Earth

.

Secondly

, because of many helps for

the

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space

due to

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the

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human have to buy more material for experiments and emit

many

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apply

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pollution which affect

to

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the Ozone and the Oxygen of the

Earth

.

Furthermore

, the

researches

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research

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on

space

are waste of time.

Therefore

, they have to use more

money

to boost the time faster.

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,

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chemical

material

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materials

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such

as Nitrogen

, Sulfur

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and sulfur

can be

use

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used

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to do research

of

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on

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the

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apply

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space

though

it

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they

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have a big impact on the Ozone and the gas

of

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apply

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Sulfur can be

harm

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harmful

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for

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to

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human

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humans

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.

However

, there is a solution

for

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to

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this

issue. The scientists and governments should take the

money

to spend on the living standard of

Earth

more than

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space

. If we spend the

money

on the facility of

Earth

it can have so many positive benefits like improving the atmosphere for

citizen

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citizens

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, reducing the lack of Ozone,

developing

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and developing

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many methods to protect the environment.

Moreover

, it can have less danger of the work because if we are outside the

Earth

we will have less

supportation

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supposition

than inside it and the

money

to spend on it will be

saving

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saved

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. In conclusion, the writer strongly

argue

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argues

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that

spend

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spending

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money

for

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on

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the living standard of

Earth

will have many

advantages

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more advantages

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than for

the

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apply

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space

each year.