lots of
money
are spent on global
year
while
some
people
opposed it should be invented to improving lifestyle on the earth.
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totally agree
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that spending
money
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will give
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reasons
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this
will be achieved.
on the one hand, millions of dollars are invented
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. they think it can
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the
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and culture in countries.
however
, it
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for lots of
money
while
people
can use it to improve clamour for
people
.
moreover
,
this
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money
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they predict it can be
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.
on the other hand
,
people
think
money
should
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on improving living standards.
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, it is a million
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dollars
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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is
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number so that
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can use it to do
which they believe
it Correct pronoun usage
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is beneficial. critically,
this
money
can help lots of
people
who are dealing with
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.
for example
,
people
in
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which Correct pronoun usage
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have so
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who are dealing with
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health, food,
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. they need
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relief
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other countries
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are developing of financial.
in conclusion,
money
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having. you must give your health to catch them.
therefore
,
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should think clearly
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money
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in the
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