Some people think secondary school students study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that international
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subject
at school for teenagers.
While
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others
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say that, it is fruitless and
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away vital time.
This
essay will discuss both these points of view and my own perspective.
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is claimed that
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pupil's
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will not have enough extra time for other precise
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like math, physics and chemistry because of
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Moreover
, some
news
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who
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can contribute to
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of
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world
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outlook.
In other words
, children will have less time on their major
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, which are crucial for their future.
Moreover
, some
news
can change
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behavior
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and emotions to something.
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, bad
news
in
country
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can
effect
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with
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bad
association
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and can leave bad
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feelings
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with
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that state. Other people
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that
,
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this
subject
is going to be cognitive and informational.
Furhermore
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Furthermore
, it can be interesting for inquisitive people.
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children’s attitude towards politics, medical breakthroughs and
overall
interest in world
news
.
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, they can practice their ability to debate and do some extraordinary activities relative to politics and not only that.
This
obligatory
subject
can be compared with open
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.
To sum up
, adding extra compulsory
subject
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can influence in 
unwelcomed
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way and can have bad
result
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results
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.
However
, if
this
subject
will be once a week it won’t be time-consuming. As far as I am concerned,
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need to have
right
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to
choise
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choose
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is it much-needed or unnecessary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global awareness
  • Critical thinking
  • Global citizenship
  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication skills
  • Historical context
  • World affairs
  • Academic subjects
  • Bias
  • Misinformation
  • Age-appropriate
  • Media literacy
  • Educational enrichment
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