Some people think secondary school students study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
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news
need
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needs
major
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a major
subject
at school for teenagers. While
other
say that, it is fruitless and Fix the agreement mistake
others
frittering
away vital time. Replace the word
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This
essay will discuss both these points of view and my own perspective. IT
is claimed thatCorrect your spelling
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pupil's
will not have enough extra time for other precise Change the noun form
pupils
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subject’s
like math, physics and chemistry because of Change noun form
subjects
additional
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the additional
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subjects
Moreover
, some news
can be inappropriate to children who
can contribute to Correct word choice
and
change
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the change
a change
of
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in
world
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the world
In other words
, children will have less time on their major subject’s
, which are crucial for their future. Change noun form
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Moreover
, some news
can change person’s
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a person’s
behavior
and emotions to something. Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
, bad news
in country
can Correct article usage
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effect
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associations
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feelings
with
that state. Other people Change preposition
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,
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this
subject
is going to be cognitive and informational. Furhermore
, it can be interesting for inquisitive people. Correct your spelling
Furthermore
As a consequence
, it will approve
children’s attitude towards politics, medical breakthroughs and Verb problem
improve
overall
interest in world news
. Although
, they can practice their ability to debate and do some extraordinary activities relative to politics and not only that. Correct word choice
However
This
obligatory subject
can be compared with open lesson
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lessons
To sum up
, adding extra compulsory subject
can influence in Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
unwelcomed
way and can have bad Change the article
an unwelcomed
result
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results
However
, if this
subject
will be once a week it won’t be time-consuming. As far as I am concerned, pupil’s
need to have Change noun form
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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