the charts below show the change in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The graphs represent the change in owners of household appliances and the
hours
spent on house chores in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, as the use of electrical gadgets in homes increased, the hours
of work decreased over the years. Although
,
ownership of refrigerators started as the least, its use rose to the highest by 100% Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the period.
Between 1920 to
2019, the application of refrigerators in homes grew gradually by 100% from 0% .Correct word choice
and
Whereas
in the case of washing machines, the possession of these appliances which started out to be the highest at 40%, ended at around 75% by the end of the stipulated period. After 1960, the use of vacuum cleaners grew gradually to 60% more than washing machines by 2019.
More households decreased the time consumed on household work from 1920- 2019 by 40 from 50 hours
per week to 10 hours
per week.Submitted by annodunowo on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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