The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare
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A and
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B in terms of their proportion of workers of two genders.
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, what stands out from the graph is that most people in these two countries work in service occupations. Another notable point is that only a few numbers of females doing jobs related to agriculture and the reverse is true for males. Looking into
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A, services account for almost half of the total in both two genders, with 56% of
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and 49% of women. The second job that people in
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nation prefer doing is agriculture, the respective percentage of male and female workers is 29% and 43%.
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, only 15% of
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work in industry, almost double the number of the remaining gender, at just 8%. Regarding
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B, the number of female workers is as high as those of the other
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country
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, and
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figure for
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is higher, at 65%.
Country
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B sees a reversed trend in comparison to the other continent,
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32% of males and 11% of females work in the industry, a mere 3% of
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and only 1% of women do jobs related to agriculture.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • gender employment rate
  • workforce
  • disparity
  • employment trend
  • notable difference
  • counterpart
  • demographic
  • labor market
  • sector
  • predominantly
  • employment rate
  • analysis
  • comparative study
  • statistical data
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