some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experience.
There is an opinion of some individuals that state that facilities, houses and constructions and other buildings should be built patiently and
long lasting
. Add a hyphen
long-lasting
However
, another group of people
think that speedy construction is necessery
Correct your spelling
necessary
due to
the urgent provision. Despite the fact that both statements are reasonable, I wholeheartedly agree with the first option, as the quality and stability is
in the first place.
It is Change the verb form
are
a
common knowledge that, high-functioning, well-organised rugged establishments serve long-lasting, as far as a lot of money Correct article usage
apply
have
been invested and high-skilled specialists Change the verb form
has
were
taken part Unnecessary verb
apply
on
Change preposition
in
work
process. In Correct article usage
the work
another words
, Replace the adjective
another word
other words
while
transpiring of
natural disasters Change preposition
apply
such
as earthquakes, floods and hurricane
, Fix the agreement mistake
hurricanes
by
these properties above, buildings will remain the same and Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the lifes
lifes
of thousands of Correct your spelling
lives
people
will be safe. For example
, earthquake that happened in 2020 in Turkey, many flats, houses and complexes were crushed due to
low quality
Add a hyphen
low-quality
of
materials Change preposition
apply
such
as bricks, concretes
and others.
As regards prompt construction of Correct subject-verb agreement
concrete
accomodation
, it is Correct your spelling
accommodation
benificial
for Correct your spelling
beneficial
people
that does not owe
any flat or place to Correct your spelling
own
livie
. Correct your spelling
live
In nowadays
, there is a sudden increase in Change preposition
Nowadays
homelessnes
. Correct your spelling
homelessness
Thus
, in order to be apart from adverse consequences for homeless people
such
as death, starvation and coldness, many authorities decide to rapidly build care facilities or apartments, notwithstanding on small
budget. Correct article usage
a small
For instance
, after the unfortunate explosion of apartment
in Chechnya, many citizens lost their Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Therefore
, government
in 3 months intensively built several houses for locals. Add an article
the government
However
, in to cope with natural disasters and other unfortunate situations, constructions have to be well designed and long lasted
, because the Wrong verb form
lasting
people
's living standards and outcomes are essential.
To conclude
, every building in civilised countries, have
to be well constructed. Despite the fact that negative circumstances and other disasters inevitably, rugged buildings have to be ready for any battles.Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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