The graph below shows unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008.

The graph illustrates job loss stages in

Ireland

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and the

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of

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away

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nation over a period

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of 20

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years.

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the percentage of unemployment declined, the opposite was true for the figure for

people

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leaving the country in

Ireland

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. In 1998, the percentage of job loss reached the highest level at 16% in

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. Over the next 2

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the percentage of joblessness slightly fell by 2%

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plummeted to the lowest stage

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4% in 2000. Undergo a period of slight fluctuations and

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increased to 9% in 2007. Looking at the

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of

people

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leaving the nation in

Ireland

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. In 1998, about 40,000

people

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in

Ireland

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left the country. The figure for

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went away the nation reached a peak

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80,000

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. In the subsequent year,

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plummeted to slightly over 30,000

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and

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hit the lowest point at 25,000 citizens.

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,

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of

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period

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the

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of migrants increased significantly, with about 50,000

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choosing to leave their homeland.