People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.What are the most significant of these problems? How can these problems be tackled?
Nowadays, there are many problems for
people
who live in the cities
to deal with. The two noticeable issues are pollution
and over crowd
. yet it can be solved by reducing public Correct your spelling
overcrowding
transport
and rural areas
investment.
Air
pollution
is a serious problem that everyone in the world has to face, especially people
who are living in urban areas
. Cities
have many vehicles on the road. This
emits an amount. of smoke which causes the
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air
pollution
. As a consequence
, many people
have suffer
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suffered
respairatory
diseases that can lead to death. Correct your spelling
respiratory
This
is true in Vietname
as Correct your spelling
Vietnam
kundreds
of Correct your spelling
hundreds
Vietnameses
have died Correct your spelling
Vietnamese
due to
the
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air
pollution
for years.
Besides
, another urgent problem is the large number of people
moving to urban areas
, which make
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makes
cities
overcrowded. People
in rural areas
often have the intention of moving to large cities
for better education and higher opportung
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opportune
opportunity
gefemployment
. Correct your spelling
employment
However
, the more people
come to the cities
, the less spacious the cities
are build
houses and apartments. Fix the infinitive
to build
For example
, in America
the number of Add a comma
America,
the
homeless Correct article usage
apply
increases
more and more.
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people is increasing
On the other hand
, these problems can be solved by declining
the amount of Verb problem
reducing
transport
, People
should be encouraged to we public transport
instead
of private vehicle
, in order to Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
decrease
the vehicles on the streets, Verb problem
reduce
therefore
, reduce
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reducing
polluted
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pollution
air
. Moreover
, -government should invest money in comm there
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their
entrysides
to create jobs so Correct your spelling
entry sides
people
will move to rural areas
and cities
will have more spaces
.
In conclusion, living in Fix the agreement mistake
space
cities
have
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has
air
pollution
and overcronded
problems Correct your spelling
overcrowded
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, it can be solved by declining Correct your spelling
However
transport
and investing countrysides
.Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
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