Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In most

of

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the

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countries, religion is intended as

principal

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part of life.; But, many people believe

that is

not invaluable to consider religion as a part of education;

although

, religious courses have their own fans in society. Personally, I suppose it is not a good idea to teach youngsters religious

lessons

. First and foremost, in the face of technology and cultural revolutions

still

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religious societies have strong beliefs that every single person has to respect their traditions and ideologies; so, the pious

lessons

play a significant role in their education and in some

ways

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this

could be helpful. A better way of life, criticizing bad

behaviors

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such

as telling

lie

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or

back biting

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are things that are able

to

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be helpful for kids that

are

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stem from

this

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religious

lessons

.

On the other hand

, Students

specially

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at early ages do not have enough

experiences

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experience

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;

also

, their view about the world and other complicated phenomena like the existence of

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GOD is too

much

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limited. So

that

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, teaching only a special religion to scholars has the potential to make them fanatic in a way they could not accept other beliefs.

Additionally

, I admit having

freedom

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to choose religious beliefs or even being

atheist

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must be regarded as

human

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right.

To sum up

, learning religious

lessons

and accepting a group of ideas as a supreme part of your thoughts at

early

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ages

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is not counted as

good

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idea.