The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
The map illustrates the
chances
that happened to a town in Willington over three different years 1780,1860 and 2000.
From an Correct your spelling
changes
overall
view, as years passed from 1780 to 2000, farms and woods vanished, and new amenities like shops, schools, and roads were developed.
Back to
1780, the town started simply with four farms on the eastern side of the Change preposition
in
river
in Willington. Also
, there are about 100 households in the northeast and the rest of Willington is mainly forested. In 1860, some changes occurred, the number
of houses doubled from 100 to 200 compared to before. There is a bridge made to cross the river
. By contrast
, the number
of farms and woods were
halved. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
In addition
, a new road was built from the river
to the house.
In 2000, the forest was completely wiped out and replaced by a number
of schools and sports field
. The figure for homes rose to 500 and Fix the agreement mistake
fields
have
a road built from the houses to the schools. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, there are a number
of shops built on the edge of the riverbank and a wetland for birds was constructed at the end
of river
.Add an article
the river
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