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In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some advantages and disadvantages renting a house?

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facilities
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easy
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 lifestyle. In many
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, person
priotirize
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prefer
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rent
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 their
home
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instated
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instead
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than by
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one
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 own
home
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. There are
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list
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or
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of
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 merits and
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demerits
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home
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.
Disadvantages
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 outweigh the advantages. I will explain in
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individuals
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rent
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 their
home
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 near to their job place or working area.
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 and
fore most
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benifit
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benefit
benefits
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individual
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having
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 more flexibility and mobility
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 their comfort.
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person
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people
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 have not
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same
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the same
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home
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 lifelong. In
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,
family
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the family
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be move
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in
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different
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the different
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home
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homes
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 as per family
member
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members
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preferance
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preference
.
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, no need to pay for maintenance and repairs
charge
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charges
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paper work
as
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and
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 well no
any
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financial investment.
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home
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rent
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 and bills as well they can move
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need
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needs
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. On the other side,
leaving
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living
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 in renting
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home
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a home
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also
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having
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has
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a
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some disadvantages for
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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.
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always
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cooperate
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 with landlords in each and every small
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matter
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,
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on someother
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someother
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some other
persons
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people
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 the charge for
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.
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, gradually
incresed
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increased
increase
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rent
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,
restriction
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restrictions
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on
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of
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house
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the house
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, people who moving away from
the
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their
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home
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homes
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,
they
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would have to select
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of
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difficulties
entill
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in
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home
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. In conclusion, it is true that significant numbers of folks
are choose
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rent
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home
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a home
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instated
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instead
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to buy
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of buying
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own
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one. There are
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a number
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 of pros and cons behind
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 choice.
A
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 more flexible,
no
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with no
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paper work
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paperwork
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for
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high budget
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high-budget
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 investment.
As
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a
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contrast,
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a person
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person
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people
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 have to
alwasy
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always
depending
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depend
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 on
other
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others
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, fear
of
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apply
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rising
rent
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, privacy
issuse
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issues
issue
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task response
Develop your ideas more clearly. Make sure to address the advantages and disadvantages more thoroughly.
coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your essay better. Use clear topic sentences and smooth transitions between paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more specific and appropriate words.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar. Avoid run-on sentences and improve your sentence variety.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • mobility
  • upfront costs
  • maintenance
  • repairs
  • amenities
  • property taxes
  • long-term commitment
  • control
  • privacy
  • rent increase
  • restrictions
  • customization
  • investment
  • tenure
  • dependency
  • landlords
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