Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, some

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achieve good

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after doing their hard work in the examination. Certain people think that institutes should

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those

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who show brilliant academic performance. At the same time, some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in their

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should be rewarded. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and explain them.

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, I am starting with a formal point. When schools give a

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for good

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to

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it helps motivate them and

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for other

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, they think that if they do it the same

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they attain a

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same as on them. They are doing more hard work in their studies and trying to better marks in exams.

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, as per a report by BBC News, the US government started

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year new program for

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when they perform above 90 % marks in the 12th examination, they provide a scholarship and

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wave-off the fees for

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higher studies, so the result after the one-year passing rate is increased more than 30% from the

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years.

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, when they focus on those

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they have significantly improved the examination. If the

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trying to level up from the past year's results

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it is the responsibility of schools and class teachers to encourage them and

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them for

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performance.

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, as per a survey by the Times of India of the report, when starting

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activity in the schools given to

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a significant number of

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the literacy rate has increased in the country by 70% to 90% in the

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decades. In conclusion, we have discussed both views and found both are equally important, good

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students

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and show a significant improvement in

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. When they are rewarded for better performance, they will be motivated and encouraged for the future. If the student is doing good

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the country's future is always better, because

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are the future of the nation.