Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

Advertising is an essential component of modern-day commerce. There have been competing views on whether advertising is highly effective at influencing our purchasing decisions or

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has become common and

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easily ignore it. In my opinion, advertising is still extremely powerful and has

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power to

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desire

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for

products

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it is selling. Those who support the notion that advertising is not important anymore, believe that with the rise of digital media and ad-blocking software, consumers have greater control over the

commercial

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commercials

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they see or do not see.

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various channels

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as television, social media, billboards and emails

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us with different

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of

advertisements

.

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huge volume of

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desensitized

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to the content of publicity.

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advertisements

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could have a highly dissuasive impact on

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and huge

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for businesses. Those on the other side of the argument say that these days advertisers utilize various persuasive techniques to influence consumer behavior.

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, companies invest significant resources in market research to understand their target audience and produce messages in line with their desire.

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, they use influencer marketing on platforms like Instagram which has a great influence on a wide range of

people

.

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, advertising

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to

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a sense of need or urgency in consumers by using celebrity endorsement and emotional appeals. The effectiveness of these strategies is reflected in the profits generated by companies and huge

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different

advertisements

. In conclusion,

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it is true that

people

have become adept at avoiding commercials, advertising remains a powerful force that can significantly influence

consumers

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behavior

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, thanks to innovative advertising techniques, social media platforms and

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the target audience.