Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.
Advertising is an essential component of modern-day commerce. There have been competing views on whether advertising is highly effective at influencing our purchasing decisions or
it
has become common and Correct word choice
whether it
people
easily ignore it. In my opinion, advertising is still extremely powerful and has Use synonyms
a
power to Change the article
the
creates
Wrong verb form
create
desire
for Add an article
a desire
the desire
products
it is selling.
Those who support the notion that advertising is not important anymore, believe that with the rise of digital media and ad-blocking software, consumers have greater control over the Correct article usage
the products
commercial
they see or do not see. Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
Also
, Linking Words
everyday
various channels Replace the word
every day
such
as television, social media, billboards and emails Linking Words
bombarding
us with different Wrong verb form
bombard
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
advertisements
. Use synonyms
This
huge volume of Linking Words
advertisements
desensitized Use synonyms
people
to the content of publicity. Use synonyms
However
, I do not think that facing with two Linking Words
much
Correct quantifier usage
many
advertisements
Use synonyms
,
could have a highly dissuasive impact on Remove the comma
apply
people
and huge Use synonyms
loss
for businesses.
Those on the other side of the argument say that these days advertisers utilize various persuasive techniques to influence consumer behavior. Fix the agreement mistake
losses
Also
, companies invest significant resources in market research to understand their target audience and produce messages in line with their desire. Linking Words
For example
, they use influencer marketing on platforms like Instagram which has a great influence on a wide range of Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, advertising Linking Words
try
to Change the verb form
tries
revoke
a sense of need or urgency in consumers by using celebrity endorsement and emotional appeals. The effectiveness of these strategies is reflected in the profits generated by companies and huge Correct your spelling
evoke
investment
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investments
on
different Change preposition
in
advertisements
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
it is true that Linking Words
people
have become adept at avoiding commercials, advertising remains a powerful force that can significantly influence Use synonyms
consumers
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consumers'
consumer's
behavior
, thanks to innovative advertising techniques, social media platforms and Change the spelling
behaviour
find
the target audience.Wrong verb form
finding
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