Write a letter Your recently made an online purchase and the product was not the same as the description on the website. 1)What you purchased 2)Exactly how it is different to the website description 3) How you would like the company to fix the problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction about the order which I made from your online store. On October 18th, I ordered an iPhone14 Pro back cover from your website namely "iPhoneCover.com" with order number IC#458786 and I used my credit card as payment method. Certainly, please find attached a copy of the receipt.
Firstly
, the issue with the cover is, that it is not holding my phone properly and
also
has some scratch marks on it.
Moreover
, the picture of the item on your website clearly shows that it is a black colour iPhone 14 Pro cover, but in reality, it is not for that model. So, I am sure
this
is either a manufacturing fault or mistakenly shipped to my address. As a solution, and because I really like the cover I ordered, I am hoping that you will agree to send me another one for free.
Otherwise
, I would like a full refund. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Suni
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