The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
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with
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Both maps
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the Farmshire
village
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in Bunborough in the past and future plans
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2024. In general,
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there are some changes from the past. In the plans for 2024, we note that the
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store has been removed, and a supermarket and an employment assistance office have been built in the south of the
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, in Presnt, there were three farmhouses, and by 2024, one of them will be converted into a poultry farm in the northwest of the
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be provided in the forest to build a community soccer field. There were no changes to
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Bank and the Prayer Centre, so they will remain as they are in 2024.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • village
  • present day
  • plans
  • 2024
  • overview
  • key differences
  • road network
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • recreational spaces
  • impact
  • environment
  • benefits
  • challenges
  • proposed changes
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