The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

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Both maps

representing

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the Farmshire

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in Bunborough in the past and future plans

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2024. In general,

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there are some changes from the past. In the plans for 2024, we note that the

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store has been removed, and a supermarket and an employment assistance office have been built in the south of the

village

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, in Presnt, there were three farmhouses, and by 2024, one of them will be converted into a poultry farm in the northwest of the

village

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be provided in the forest to build a community soccer field. There were no changes to

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the Cooperative

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Bank and the Prayer Centre, so they will remain as they are in 2024.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

123 words

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