The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
To begin
with
Both maps Add a comma
with,
representing
the Farmshire Wrong verb form
represent
village
in Bunborough in the past and future plans in
2024.
In general, Change preposition
for
it is clear that
there are some changes from the past. In the plans for 2024, we note that the village
store has been removed, and a supermarket and an employment assistance office have been built in the south of the village
. Also
, in Presnt, there were three farmhouses, and by 2024, one of them will be converted into a poultry farm in the northwest of the village
. Space will also
be provided in the forest to build a community soccer field.
There were no changes to Cooperative
Bank and the Prayer Centre, so they will remain as they are in 2024.Correct article usage
the Cooperative
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