One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer. In your letter -Give your opinion of your friend’s business idea. - Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reasons for this decision.

Dear John, It was a nice conversation via phone call
last
night. I think that it is a brilliant idea to start a hospitality
business
in Dalian City since Dalian is a famous tourist city in China. I really appreciate that you consider me as your
business
due to
trust.
However
, after elaborating, I don’t believe that I could be a suitable
business
partner for your new
business
. There are 2 main reasons that I determined not to join your hospitality
business
.
Firstly
, I do not have any hospitality background or knowledge to support the development of your
business
.
Secondly
, I don’t have the capacity to do side
business
at the moment as I have a full-time job in an international bank. Thanks for your offer again and I am sure that your new
business
will run smoothly as you are a confident and talented businessman. Thanks, and Regards SJ
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