People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
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People
have more opportunities to taste different kinds of Use synonyms
food
. Use synonyms
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people
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food
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people
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food
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foods
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people
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sea
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seafood
food
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Besides
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this
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a serious effects
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serious effects
a serious effect
the
global finance. Correct article usage
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people
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willing
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willingness
the
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food
grown in Use synonyms
other area
,it is beneficial to global currency circulation. Change the wording
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other areas
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the Chinese
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will promote trade between the two countries.
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people
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food
, the farmer may Use synonyms
be not cultivate
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it .The farmer may Change preposition
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be not plant
it next year .After that ,the peasant who only Change the verb form
not plant
grow
watermelons will lose his job.
In conclusion ,having more enthusiasm Change the verb form
grows
on
other localities’ Change preposition
for
food
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people
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global finance but it Correct article usage
apply
also
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effects on career problem. The above are all the merits and demerits.Change the verb form
has
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task response
The essay lacks a clear thesis statement and does not fully address the advantages and disadvantages of eating food from other regions. Provide a clear introduction and outline the main points to be discussed in the body paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the essay can be improved. Use transitional words and phrases to connect ideas within sentences and between paragraphs. Additionally, provide more supporting details and examples to strengthen your arguments.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and varied words and phrases. This will help to convey your ideas more accurately and effectively. Avoid repetitive language and consider using synonyms or alternative expressions.
grammatical range
Work on improving your grammatical range. Pay attention to sentence structure, verb tenses, and agreement. Aim for greater accuracy and avoid common errors.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.