A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Nancy, How are you? I hope you have a great and happy time in your new school. It is not easy to get a seat in a high-standard school which includes a scholarship, I am so proud to be your friend. I am just writing

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letter to say hi and give my two cents.

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, I know you are an introvert and can't mingle with new ones with ease. Just introduce your name to others and select a small group to initiate conversation. As all are the same age, just be casual and don't feel shy.

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, take notes from them if any topic is already covered.

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, as you have been interested in tennis, enrol your name in sports activities and

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learn new indoor and outdoor games.

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to that, you can interact with all school students by joining as a club member. As a general suggestion, I know that you are a great Noval writer, so daily spend some time writing so that you won't lose practice. We will definitely meet next month if possible. Take care. With Love, Suni

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task response

Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the task prompt.

coherence cohesion

Add more connectors and transitional phrases to improve the coherence and cohesion of the letter.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to make the letter more interesting.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and use a variety of sentence types to showcase your grammatical range.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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