In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In a lot of
countries
Add a comma
countries,
children
are occupied in something similar to a
paid Correct article usage
apply
work
. While
somebodies consider it totally incorrect, others are convinced that is
beneficial work
experience. In my opinion, i
believe that having a paid Change the capitalization
I
work
job prepare teenagers for their further
future life, by building them as an independent individuals
. Correct the article-noun agreement
independent individuals
an independent individual
However
, this
may have a
negative consequences on their childhood.
On the one hand, many people consider Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
work
for teenagers as a bad idea, and they are quite right. Working on
Change preposition
in
a
teenage Correct article usage
the
years
negatively affects on child
psyche, schedule, school grades, and even relationships with friends. Change noun form
child's
This
cause a lot of stress, sometimes even anxiety, that distract children
from other aspects of their life. That is
why many people conserved about this
. Take for example
teenage years
, while
they have to be well educated, study for their knowledge, and live for a
pleasure, they are working, Remove the article
apply
what
takes a huge amount of time and bothers them to make a Correct pronoun usage
which
completed
healthy lifestyle.
Replace the word
complete
On the other hand
, having work
experience in a
young Correct article usage
the
years
prevents children
from a future unloved job, by realising what they are fond of, and making them ready for being an adult and hard working
individuals. Add a hyphen
hard-working
Furthermore
, unfortunately
not every teenager Add a comma
unfortunately,
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
choice
whether to Add an article
a choice
work
or not. Sometimes they just have to do it, in order to help their parents. For instance
, by saving and serving their parents, children
learn to be independent and thankful from
a Change preposition
for
little
Correct quantifier usage
few
years
. It shows that bad circumstances can turn into a good lesson as well.
In conclusion, getting a job in young
Correct article usage
the young
years
is a very significant step toward becoming an adult that makes children
mature. However
, if it engage
a lot of time in teenage childhood and Change the verb form
engages
constitute
a loss of childish memories, it will have a negative effect, that will harm Change the verb form
constitutes
young
Correct article usage
the young
aged
mindsetCorrect word choice
apply
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