The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the average yearly expense
on
mobile Change preposition
of
phone
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services
and Use synonyms
landline
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phone
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services
during the period of 2001 to 2010.
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Overall
, during the earlier years of the study Linking Words
landline
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phone
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services
controlled the market for communication Use synonyms
services
, but with the evolution of technology during later years, cell Use synonyms
phone
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services
became the preferred communication service.
Starting in the Use synonyms
year
2001, Use synonyms
landline
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phone
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services
were at their all-time high averaging around 700 Use synonyms
dollars
per Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
in
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contrast
cell Add a comma
contrast,
phone
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services
faced their lowest expenditure circling at around 200 Use synonyms
dollars
the before mentioned Use synonyms
year
. During the upcoming years, until 2010 residential Use synonyms
phone
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services
investment saw a steady decline losing around 50 to 100 Use synonyms
dollars
per Use synonyms
year
until it reached around 400 Use synonyms
dollars
expended in their communication service.
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Consequently
, as residential Linking Words
phone
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services
saw a steady decline, the demand for mobile Use synonyms
phone
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services
saw a drastic increase up until the Use synonyms
year
2010 Use synonyms
where
it peaked at almost 800 Correct word choice
when
dollars
during that Use synonyms
year
, surpassing Use synonyms
landline
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phones
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phones'
phone's
highest
invested Add an article
a highest
year
. It is worth mentioning that 2006 was a crucial Use synonyms
year
for mobile Use synonyms
phone
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services
, as it was the Use synonyms
year
where they surpassed the amount of money invested in their service compared Use synonyms
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while
residential Change preposition
to
phone
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services
decreased.Use synonyms
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