The table shows the average salaries in US dollars in five countries at different stages until achieving the maximum salary.

The table shows the average salaries in US dollars in five countries at different

stages until achieving the maximum salary.
The table below compares five continents in terms of their average incomes in US dollars at different stages until reaching the highest salary.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Luxembourg starts and finishes at the highest point. Another notable point is that Denmark achieves the maximum salary faster than the other countries. Looking into the starting point, the wage of Luxembourg is 80000 US dollars, exceeding that of Denmark, Japan, Korea, and Australia, with 45000, 34000, 30000, and 28000 USD respectively. Over the following 15 years, Luxembourg is still ranked
first,
at 119000 in the same currency, compared to two countries ranked fifth, Australia and Korea, with 48000 USD for each. Regarding the maximum salary, the country with the highest ranking can achieve 132000 US dollars, almost double the figure for Korea, at only 62000 USD.
Although
Denmark is the country with the lowest average income, it experiences the fastest speed to achieve that level in comparison to the remaining countries, taking only 8 years.
Finally
, Japanese people have spent 37 years to reach 86000 in the same currency.
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